a distant voice, by tangerine.kidd Subscribe to rss feed for tangerine.kidd

july 4th 2005  (monday)

can you remember the sound
so soft and subtle it was almost nothing
can you remember her face
so innocent and sweet she could have been something

do you remember that day
almost another night that almost passed her by
do you remember that moment
almost another second & you would have saw her cry

how can you forget
about the day you changed her inside
how can you lie
about the girl that slowly died

remember her
for she was the one who feared you
remember me now
for i am no longer afraid of what you'll do

...i will stand up for her and stay true...
Posted: 2005-11-01 04:49:00 UTC

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2005-08-13 22:58:44ImaginaryAngel
it is really good! i love it!

2005-12-19 18:26:52Faith
Wow... this poem is really good. You have an interesting way of writing, i like it!

2006-02-04 22:29:22No Child Is Innocent Once Born
Amazing!

2006-06-08 21:44:20XRebzX
I really really love this poem! It's great! Please could you let me know how you change your style and colour of text? [email protected] Thanks very much And keep writing!