a distant voice, by tangerine.kidd
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july 4th 2005 (monday)
can you remember the sound
so soft and subtle it was almost nothing
can you remember her face
so innocent and sweet she could have been something
do you remember that day
almost another night that almost passed her by
do you remember that moment
almost another second & you would have saw her cry
how can you forget
about the day you changed her inside
how can you lie
about the girl that slowly died
remember her
for she was the one who feared you
remember me now
for i am no longer afraid of what you'll do
...i will stand up for her and stay true... |
Posted: 2005-11-01 04:49:00 UTC |
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2005-12-19 18:26:52 | Faith |
Wow... this poem is really good. You have an interesting way of writing, i like it! |
2006-06-08 21:44:20 | XRebzX |
I really really love this poem! It's great!
Please could you let me know how you change your style and colour of text?
[email protected]
Thanks very much
And keep writing! |