a distant voice

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By tangerine.kidd

<font color=navy face=tahoma size=2>july 4th 2005 (monday) can you remember the sound so soft and subtle it was almost nothing can you remember her face so innocent and sweet she could have been something do you remember that day almost another night that almost passed her by do you remember that moment almost another second & you would have saw her cry how can you forget about the day you changed her inside how can you lie about the girl that slowly died remember her for she was the one who feared you remember me now for i am no longer afraid of what you'll do ...i will stand up for her and stay true...

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August 13, 2005 22:58ImaginaryAngel

it is really good! i love it!

December 19, 2005 18:26Faith

Wow... this poem is really good. You have an interesting way of writing, i like it!

February 4, 2006 22:29No Child Is Innocent Once Born

Amazing!

June 8, 2006 21:44XRebzX

I really really love this poem! It's great!
Please could you let me know how you change your style and colour of text?

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Thanks very much

And keep writing!