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By connie

you gave me a ring you gave me your heart even after i told u not to right from the very start you gave me that look you gave me that smile that made me just want to stay a while you gave me your eyes you gave me ur kiss these are the things i will always miss i gave you 8 years althought four of them were full of tears you left me so fast i didn't know it wouldn't last i miss you so much even now looking at that picture it still makes me blush thinking of that night god were u a sight i know what to expect when he walked up to me in the hall now i know what they mean when they say its better to have loved and lost then to never have loved at all i didn't want to hear the words im sorry but hes gone i couldn't believe it you were always so strong half of my heart is missing even being with you for those four years was a blessing seing your body being put in the ground it felt weird with you not around

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July 21, 2005 03:16etherdemon

wow... ouch

August 15, 2005 00:49Lillian

So sad, yet so beautiful...

September 25, 2006 00:13[c a s a n d r a]

i agree w/ angelina. the "better to love and lost than never loved at all" part got me all emotional lol..

February 17, 2007 23:13Lil'Fighter

Great Poem! Thanks for your comment on my poem. I appreciate it. Thanks again. This poem. Wow!

January 18, 2008 16:44Sheila

Touching and sad.

March 13, 2009 20:06!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

WELL WRITTEN GOOD JOB