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By fyreflylights •

i have pushed you and fought you pulled you in one direction to let you down owned a piece of your heart and not been exactly careful with it. i have searched out your buttons and i'm sure i've pushed a few there must have been moments when i've forgotten you have a dream. but even when the wind blows here, somewhere it's colder. and even when my arm aches it still wants to go around you. i have a hope that nothing i do will ever hurt you... but i can't make any promises.

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August 30, 2005 05:28Anathema

this is one of the most beautifuls things i've ever read, because of its simplicity. It's simple, but so true, and it almost aches to be read by people who have experienced it..i loved it.

April 3, 2006 17:07♥Just Sam♥

I don't know what to say.... Oh, wait, yeah I do: THIS IS THE MOST POINTLESS PIECE OF CRAP SINCE I SAW THE MOVIE "STAY ALIVE"....!
And another thing, why don't you pull your head out of your ass and try harder....or just stop NOW!

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April 9, 2010 01:28baya

hmm wow i see the critism but at least its honest but take the advice . . play a little more with the format and the way your words flow if you truely want to be amazing . . .