memory of a morning

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By fyreflylights

as i lie here in my blue cocoon of a sleeping bag at the crack of november, i am reminded - of the comforting bliss of your ankles mingled with mine, feet ready to walk but understanding the importance of learning to move together first. i am reminded of it being odd that i was so aware of myself, knees searching solace and heart tripping unsteadily as easy fingers met with your eyelid by mistake. and i am reminded of a wish to whisper in your ear: my body loves its corners because you fit them.

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July 24, 2005 13:44waterlily

i like the simplicity of the poem for the warmth it conveys between the two of them.the ending is the sweetest part of human sexpression to me..my body love it corners..cos u fit them!"as love should feel like to us all.warmth and deelightfull it was.

September 23, 2008 15:18Majester

wehey,

April 9, 2010 01:25baya

i liked this poem . . .
the format is amazing this seems to tell a hidden story . . . am i right?