What A FRIEND, by Heart of Poetry

What A FRIEND, by Heart of Poetry

A big HEART
A small mind
A beautiful face
With nothing to do
With YOU
For that is how I 
Feel he doesn't want ME
He wants my FRIEND


Heart broken sad 
Not wanted 


I cant have him 
My friend some 
friend she is can


She never talked to
Me again 
And she is with him

Posted: 2005-07-10 16:23:24 UTC

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2005-10-10 04:23:14	Amby
Good insight maybe.. But it sounds too much like teenage drama. I also dont like the form. I'll give you a 3.

2007-06-03 09:44:09	curly
ey this is great, I really like it, maybe because something like that happened to me

2008-02-03 20:46:18	Sweetgirl608
I really like it was very good stay strong

2013-05-12 00:21:37	Auden
Hey I think this is amazing....I love it! I was wondering if you could check out some of my poems and tell me how they are?