What A FRIEND

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By Heart of Poetry •

A big HEART A small mind A beautiful face With nothing to do With YOU For that is how I Feel he doesn't want ME He wants my FRIEND Heart broken sad Not wanted I cant have him My friend some friend she is can She never talked to Me again And she is with him

Current vote: 8.0 / 5

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October 10, 2005 04:23Amby

Good insight maybe.. But it sounds too much like teenage drama. I also dont like the form. I'll give you a 3.

June 3, 2007 09:44curly

ey this is great, I really like it, maybe because something like that happened to me

February 3, 2008 20:46Sweetgirl608

I really like it was very good stay strong

May 12, 2013 00:21Auden

Hey I think this is amazing....I love it! I was wondering if you could check out some of my poems and tell me how they are?