you're hurting me

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By these cuts kill..

don't you see that you're hurting me? although i can't really speak, you know that it upsets me because it's only the blood you seek i hate it when i see the marks the fresh shapes and the old i thought that you could talk to me suddenly you dont seem so bold you're fake smile fits you so well but i can see right through i know inside you're dying but theres nothing i can do i feel so helpless im so unsure its not clear if we're close at all some people dont understand they look with weird eyes they cant see that we cant cope theyre waiting for our goodbye's but i cant bear to see you sad you've helped me and i want to help you too i cant bear to see the pain in youre eyes i wish we could just run and hide i hold you so very dear you're my close friend and i need you here so put that down and come over here and noone can hurt us if we help each other

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November 28, 2005 03:40just me_

i love your poem. exactly everything i've been trying to put into words. good job =)

January 30, 2006 00:51love nothing >>--

Nice Poem...really, and your name too

February 4, 2006 22:44No Child Is Innocent Once Born

Simply Amazing, it's honest and deep. People look but they never really see the things that we really truely need.

August 9, 2007 04:23xxSoulsxxLiexx

This poem has beautiful wording and has great meaning to it too