A silence fills the hallway..

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A silence fills the hallway It climbs up the walls It hangs onto the ceiling It sinks into my pores A silence fills the hallway While a young girl cries She dare not make a noise Cus he’ll beat her otherwise A silence fills the hallway As a young girl grabs a knife She feels for its sharpness To try to take her life A silence fills the hallway As a young girl slits her wrists She hopes that she will die tonight Cus she cant take any more of his hits A silence fills the hallway As blood fills up the floor A young girl lays there dying But shes not crying anymore A silence fills the hallway As a young girl smiles She can fells herself dying She knows it has been worthwhile A silence fills the hallway As a young girl writes a note She scribbles she is sorry, mum, But she just cant cope A scream fills the hallway As a mother finds her daughter Surrounded by a crimson puddle If only she’d tried to help her…. A silence fills the hallway As the doctors rush around They’re trying hard to save her life But they can’t bring her back round A silence fills the hallway As a young girl lies there dead She didn’t mean to hurt them But she couldn’t take the pain instead A silence fills the hallway As a mother receives the news The death of her only child Her mouth can barely move A silence fills the hallway As a father receives the news He beat his only child And left her no other escape to use A sob fills the hallway As her friends learn of her death She couldn’t take the pain anymore Not even just one more breath A silence fills the hallway As a funeral takes place A young girl died Because she couldn’t take his abuse. A silence fills the hallway As a young girl is buried Her soul flies away from her Her pain is free forever.

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July 29, 2005 06:09Silent Cries

The was one off the best poems I ever read in my life. It had me in tears.

November 15, 2005 20:17 Kirsty (living in the light)

i must say you have a talent in writing poems. I LOVE YOUR POEMS the capital letters were not a mistake

February 4, 2006 22:47No Child Is Innocent Once Born

Omg, you're making me break my promise! I promised myself I'd never cry again! And I'm sitting here in tears!

September 4, 2006 02:39Razorblade Kisses

I admit it I cried because my god,it's exactly how I used to be-beautiful!

January 1, 2007 21:40sk8t3R gal 4 eva

OMG!!! your poem is so beautiful! i was crying throuout the whole poem! get it published or something!

December 31, 2009 02:44StarStarlit

i absolutely love this poem-so very touching and heartbreaking, yet I've been there almost once...twice...three...etc times, and yet this is absolutely filling up my heart with tears. simply beautiful, about what a girl can feel, what a girl can do, what a girl can go through, and society around her...what a magnificent poem-i couldnt have said it better myself-if u want, u can read mine too lolz :))