Love You, by ♥DeAnna♥
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No matter
whatever happens,
No matter what we go through,
Everyday of our life,
I love you more, it's true.
Life is not meant to be perfect,
We all make mistakes sometimes.
You'll always be my baby,
Until the end of time.
Your the love of my life,
We made this promise:'Forever'.
My darling, my angel,
I'll leave you never.
No matter what we go through,
I will always love you.
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| Posted: 2010-02-01 20:51:01 UTC |
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| 2005-07-31 10:39:14 | waterlily |
| until the end of time.reminds me of "father figure" by george michael."I will leave you never>"looks original to my eye.sounds like a love with firm conviction! |
| 2005-10-11 01:00:25 | Amby |
| Sounds like a sterotypical love poem. Not original, but nice form. I give you a 3. |
| 2008-08-22 00:18:18 | Craney |
| At least, I feel real rhyme and notion in the poem. What a lovely work. |
| 2008-12-07 19:52:09 | mandymandy |
| its very nice but also very vague. |