"This Is What Happens When You Start A Journal"**

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By AHopelessMemory

She's questioning why the tape wont stay on the wall She's processing an escape through a bathroom stall Procrastination flows naturally in her veins She starts an journal as a way to vent, to keep her sane And thinking's dangerous when she's in this kind of state She draws a picture of her path, her chosen fate She screams at the top of her lungs, without even opening her mouth She's feeling forlorn, and isn't ready for depression in this amount She's pulling on the paper, to just hear a rip What's she to do, when everyone see's her imperfectness? Struggle and Confusion Anxioty and Stress This is her. . . At her best

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July 31, 2005 10:04Lillian

This is so me. I love it... extremely excellent work!! ..Cindy

August 1, 2005 04:31Silent Cries


I can totally relate!

Silent Cries

August 3, 2005 03:44Pylia

Great stuff!! As the others said I can totally relate.

August 10, 2005 13:53 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

There are many people who deal with stress each day of their life, and at times like when others sleep these people cannot sleep for the thoughts of their mind,I have the reverse problem. when I awake my mind is flooded with thoughts, all crowding in for their time in the *sun (of my mind).So this poem relates to me very well. great Job!

December 6, 2005 03:18 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Still Relative!

March 15, 2007 18:12Angel of Music

This is really good. Great Job!!!!!

March 19, 2008 17:02I'm Not Romantic, Romeo...

WwwoOowwW. Excellent! I like. I like.