a lover may take your hand

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By waterlily

a lover may take your hand study your face with his masculine eye caressing you best knowing each test a lover may take your heart witness it from the start triumphant in the duel make you the fool intending to be cruel a lover may take your cloak causing your eye to soak cursing that handsum bloke making you broke hoping he will croak a lover may take your all while having a ball making it his call while you try to stall a lover may take your pussy since he aint no whoosie even if you never liked sex he make you think it is blessed since he was your ex a lover may take your hand study your face with his masculine eye caressing you best knowing each test a lover may take your heart witness it from the start triumphant in the duel make you the fool intending to be cruel

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July 24, 2005 23:58XRebzX

Great work!! i really liked this poem. Full of emotion, the right words and deep. Well done!!

July 29, 2005 23:39waterlily

Thank you Rebz! It was very sweet of you to say that to me.Made me curious about your poems 2!

July 31, 2005 17:12Notta

Like Rebz said, Full of emotion and the right word. I like it alot.

October 1, 2005 12:32Finding Myself♥♥

very good. i'm sorry.

November 3, 2005 22:59LaShawnna

Awesome Poem! There is defiantly truth in there don't stop writing.