my joy is slight

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By waterlily •

my joy is slight inn midst of night my prayer of will is abbsolute still my eye of green does spot the unseen my heart can feel upon the dance of a wind so real my heart can dig for my good tasting fig my hand can measure one solid good treasure my eye can test what is missed by the rest my heart can feel beyond space or time can reveal my joy is suptle inn midst of night rumble my prayer of hope is my silent way to cope my eye of green can penetrate the unforseen but upon the whispering wind i can feel prophecy inside my skin my eye can test what is missed by the best my heart can reveal trust if i honor my own feel my joy is slight in midst of the night my prayer of will is abbsolute still

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August 22, 2005 18:44turquoise petals

very sweet

September 22, 2005 17:46Don't build lies on ice cubes.

I like this poem, particularly the way you use repeition. And I love the green eye imagery, Ive used that too. Thank you for commenting on my poems :) Im glad someone reads them!