<font color="navy" size="4">All I Ever Wanted

By ♥DeAnna♥ •
By ♥DeAnna♥ •
Current vote: 6.5 / 5
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i love this poem it's fab
It's again like the same old love poem, not original at all, and also in the beginning you tried to hold some kind of form with your rhyming, then fell off of it towards the middle and end. If you're going to start something, see it through. I give you a 4.
Hi. I like this poem, its oringial in its own sense of being so ignore Amby. Well done!! I like it!
Amby, I'm glad you can say anything on this site cause I really wanna call you a BITCH. This is an extremely heartfelt poem I wrote after my husband and I had gone through some rough times. I didn't write it to be in perfect form or to rhyme, I wrote it because it's what I felt. Thanks No Child Is Innocent Once Born.