All I Ever Wanted, by ♥DeAnna♥
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All I ever wanted was to find a love that was true,
And I thought that I found that love whenever I met you.
But now the way things seem to be,
I’m really not so sure,
It hurt so bad to hear you say “I don’t love you
anymore”.
Still not sure how you really feel,
I just want to feel that our love is real.
I know that the way I feel is true,
But how do I find out about you.
You say ‘I love you’ with such ease,
I just don’t know the truth,
Are you trying not to hurt me?
Or is it really true.
Did you change your mind, or maybe your heart?
Do you love me or is it just frustration of not knowing?
I need your love; I need your touch,
I need to know you love me so much.
Please tell me the truth that’s all that I ask
I need you, I want you, and I love you,
But more than that, I need the truth from you.
Please don’t hurt me, but if you must,
Do it now before it’s too late.
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| Posted: 2009-12-10 09:50:26 UTC |
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| 2005-10-11 01:03:10 | Amby |
| It's again like the same old love poem, not original at all, and also in the beginning you tried to hold some kind of form with your rhyming, then fell off of it towards the middle and end. If you're going to start something, see it through. I give you a 4. |
| 2006-01-15 18:29:14 | ♥DeAnna♥ |
| Amby, I'm glad you can say anything on this site cause I really wanna call you a BITCH. This is an extremely heartfelt poem I wrote after my husband and I had gone through some rough times. I didn't write it to be in perfect form or to rhyme, I wrote it because it's what I felt. Thanks No Child Is Innocent Once Born. |