Crush, by Notta
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Why must I have a crush on you?
I know one thing,
and that is if I had a chance,
I would love you,
Until the end of time.
Until the sun burns dry.
I will be yours for all eternity.
I will just love you.
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Posted: 2005-08-02 17:52:35 UTC |
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2005-07-31 07:35:21 | waterlily |
i love the strong intent expressed here!until the sun burns dry.sounds original to my ear.and i wonder if it is Possible?hmm? that is what is exciting about good poetry !When you can really think about the words written down so precise!if only lovers could all ways feel that way about each other!how dreamy it would bee! |
2007-05-15 23:23:40 | Angel of Music |
Great job! I can compleatly relate to the feeling in this poem! Keep up the good work! :) |