Never

By Silent Cries</font • August 1, 2005 23:25 UTC

I never could trust my family, they always turned their back on me. I never could trust my closest friends, they never could see exactly what I could see. I never could have my own, it was always tooken from me. I never got over "his" death, that's why I'm unhappy. It hurts cause I never could, that's why I'm crying now. It hurts cause I know "he" would, that's why I'm cleaning the wrist of my left arm with this towel. "He" trusted me. "He" was the closest to me. "He" helped me own my own. And now "He's" tooken from me. (Never take anyone for granted! IN LOVING MEMORY OF: Devonte' Moore-I LOVE YOU!)

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July 30, 2005 00:57love nothing >>--

aww....sounds sad...i sorry...

August 1, 2005 12:21X_LUCY_INNES_X

i can understand how you feel

August 16, 2005 20:30a rose by any otha name

tragic, makes the soul want to bleed

January 16, 2006 10:29Thoughtless Encounters

this is an awesome poem. but please fix 'it was always tooken from me.' tooken is not a word.

November 9, 2006 14:53*Psychopathic Child*

I'm sorry about that.......its hard when you lose someone dear

January 1, 2007 21:56sk8t3R gal 4 eva

i know how you feel... my bf was tooken from me too. its very sad. thiz poem had me in tears

June 27, 2007 05:15User

I feel so sorry for you and I truly understand how you feel about this..a very touching poem..

November 7, 2007 23:00sk8t3R gal 4 eva

wow... you know wut? i wrote a poem thats almost exactly like this. i also had a friend whos name was Darien Moore and he was taken by leukemia... sadness... *tear*

December 4, 2007 02:28wife2be

i know how you feel it hurts when you lose someone .....i would know ....but you'll always have the memories. but this is a great poem it made me cry.

January 3, 2009 02:54 < * † ♦ ♥ glowz ♥ ♦ † * >

I'm sorry for your loss. Your never gonna forget him, but you should'nt. Remembering him in this beautiful poem is a start, and he can still help you "own your own". your poem has touched my heart. He can help you through touching others, as he has here in this poem. I hope you write more poems.

March 13, 2009 19:41!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

I FEEL THIS PAIN EVERY NIGHT AS I DREAM

March 11, 2010 15:11Convalescence

This is beautiful, but it's soooo sad.

March 26, 2010 04:17baya

im sorry