Never, by Silent Cries
Silent Cries
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I never could trust my family,
they always turned their back on me.
I never could trust my closest friends,
they never could see exactly what I could see.
I never could have my own,
it was always tooken from me.
I never got over "his" death,
that's why I'm unhappy.
It hurts cause I never could,
that's why I'm crying now.
It hurts cause I know "he" would,
that's why I'm cleaning
the wrist of my left
arm with this towel.
"He" trusted me.
"He" was the closest to me.
"He" helped me own my own.
And now "He's" tooken from me.
(Never take anyone for granted!
IN LOVING MEMORY OF:
Devonte' Moore-I LOVE YOU!) |
Posted: 2005-08-01 23:25:20 UTC |
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2006-01-16 10:29:39 | Thoughtless Encounters |
this is an awesome poem. but please fix 'it was always tooken from me.' tooken is not a word.
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2006-11-09 14:53:40 | *Psychopathic Child* |
I'm sorry about that.......its hard when you lose someone dear |
2007-01-01 21:56:17 | sk8t3R gal 4 eva |
i know how you feel... my bf was tooken from me too. its very sad. thiz poem had me in tears |
2007-06-27 05:15:57 | User |
I feel so sorry for you and I truly understand how you feel about this..a very touching poem.. |
2007-11-07 23:00:12 | sk8t3R gal 4 eva |
wow... you know wut? i wrote a poem thats almost exactly like this. i also had a friend whos name was Darien Moore and he was taken by leukemia... sadness... *tear* |
2007-12-04 02:28:41 | wife2be |
i know how you feel it hurts when you lose someone .....i would know ....but you'll always have the memories. but this is a great poem it made me cry. |
2009-01-03 02:54:43 | |
I'm sorry for your loss. Your never gonna forget him, but you should'nt. Remembering him in this beautiful poem is a start, and he can still help you "own your own". your poem has touched my heart. He can help you through touching others, as he has here in this poem. I hope you write more poems. |
2010-03-11 15:11:56 | Convalescence |
This is beautiful, but it's soooo sad. |
2010-03-26 04:17:22 | baya |
im sorry |