Mountains, by ladypink
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This path I choose
Has been long and heartbreaking
With so many obstacles
Some, my own making
Sometimes I climb mountains
Bloodied and battered I ascend
I have reached the peak
And climbed down again
Tired and forsaken
I rest at the end
Look back at my struggles
And started again
So many mountains
So many lofts
So much effort
At what cost?
Each day a struggle
Each day a hill
Bloodied and battered
I wearily climb still
Give me a day
Without struggle or pain
Just one day
I'll welcome the gain
Where are the meadows
And fields of moss
Where to lay down
And count my loss
I want to chase rainbows
With butterflies dance
If only these mountains
Would give me a chance
Please, no more mountains
I've had my share
Give me sunshine and rainbows
To wear in my hair
Give me meadows and fields
With blossoms aflower
And soft green grass
If only for an hour
Somewhere to rest
My weary heart
Just for a while
And then I will start
To climb again.
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Posted: 2005-08-08 15:07:07 UTC |
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2005-08-16 01:10:10 | Loneliness is condescending |
wow this is really well concived i enjoyed you comment and am thinking about checking out that site and again this poem is alluring |
2006-01-09 22:03:24 | .xx:+.Disposable.Darling.+:xx. |
this is a really nice poem. you really sucked me in and i could almost see, you know metaphorically, you climbing mountains and the field and etc. and it easy to tell how the mountains and the meadows etc equate with problems and hardships and the desired state of happiness. wicked poem. |
2009-05-17 18:27:34 | marsha |
all I can say is "wow" |