"Sensitive Eyes, Plus", by AHopelessMemory
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I spill my soul with paper and a pen
And compress everything I keep hidden
Legs shaking, to the touch of my remedy
And i'm addicted to loving my enemy's
Pain and blades is my only zen
Beat me with my own self-contemplation
Hurting through day-time life
Then blackness occurs at night
My touch, my fire, is burning out
So, listen to what i'm all about
Craving, and starving for love
Leave me, and send the confusion above
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Posted: 2005-08-06 03:31:11 UTC |
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2005-08-10 14:01:03 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
wow! compression! this poem feels like you have a very big heart and soul great poem! |
2005-09-19 01:53:03 | ill haven |
L4: enemies
I like this a lot! Wow!
It seems as if you accidentally knocked over the ink bottle that is your soul. |
2005-10-10 23:53:07 | Crimson.Wings |
This is a very good poem. I really like it a lot! :D |