The Dark

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By little_irish_rose

You've picked on me, for the last time. Now I commit, a most grusome crime. I slice your wrists, and give you neck a gentle twist. I burn you with, a cigarette's head. And watch the ashes turn to red. In the darkness, I hear you cry. But you screams slowly fade, as you die.... This poem is by my little brother William (10) and myself.

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September 18, 2005 19:38hidden

you make the pain rhyme, i like that.

September 19, 2005 01:29little_irish_rose

thanx.... my little brother did most of it, but i helped him out with some.... he's a really talented poet.... atleast i think so....

September 23, 2005 22:04hidden

He is, well done to him i say. I was still reading childrens book (I was a slow learner, it only in puberty that i have really caught up) when i was ten. he is talented

September 24, 2005 14:24little_irish_rose

my little brother wants me to say thanx....