Forever the sun.

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By Sara •

I look up; the sun shines down upon me, I feel its heat, like taking a warm bath, How can something so powerful, magical, Bring light, warmth and life, And yet at the same time, Bring death, misery and darkness? I let its soothing rays fall all around me, Like a snake out of place, looking, But I know, this cant last forever, Someday it’ll bring death to all, the end, The maker of life, The destroyer of life, The sun lasts forever . . .

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August 14, 2005 16:31Lora

This is good sara although i think the first line should have the "I look up;" taken out of it..it would give the poem more rythm good though xx

August 15, 2005 19:35hidden

YOu quite like the sun don't you? Anyway I like this yet I fail to see how the sun brings misery and darkness.

I think thats the lack of the sun maybe? still good stuff.

August 19, 2005 13:40silver_shadow

i like your poem!!!! you are very talented, keep at it!

November 5, 2005 00:18Crimson.Wings

I like this poem. thanx 4 commenting on my poems.

November 20, 2005 06:54Mykl

I understand the ways that the sun destroys life. Everything must have an opposite to exist. You are doing marvelous work. Keep writing out the pain . It will serve you well.