Cold hearted, by Heart-Less
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horrible
The world is a beautiful place.
frown
It makes me smile on a rainy day.
NOT
It makes my heart know exactly what ^ to say.
Wonderful. Scared.
Joyful. Lonely.
Secure. Hurt.
Happy. Upset.
These are feelings I feel in
this cold-hearted world today.
Scared because I'm lonely.
Lonely because I'm hurt.
Hurt because I'm upset.
Upset because this world is so cold-hearted. |
| Posted: 2005-08-10 18:03:21 UTC |
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| 2005-08-13 14:58:27 | faith. . . |
| effective with the layout type thing...the crossings out...good! |
| 2005-08-13 19:15:51 | abs |
| wow this poem is really made by the presentation- the contrast between what is actually said and what is crossed out makes it much more emotive. i ike it :) |
| 2005-08-15 20:49:34 | ... |
| this is a really good poem and the presentation makes it even better! |
| 2005-08-16 18:50:55 | kelly |
| yeah i love it! it's really emotional and VERY true to most people i should imagine! how do you get the font and everything like that and the colour in your name? |
| 2005-08-16 20:07:29 | Sara |
| Wow thats amazing.
Sara
x |
| 2005-08-17 09:59:36 | Poet Gal |
| real gd. tht can be true to most ppl. |
| 2005-08-18 18:25:55 | wishing_on_stars |
| Wise words. I love the lay-out. This is truly excellent! |
| 2005-09-27 03:14:59 | ill haven |
| how on earth did you do this?? |
| 2005-10-01 22:49:42 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
| i'm with chuff, i'd totaly do this if i knew how. your poem is awsome. wow. |
| 2005-10-10 23:56:16 | Crimson.Wings |
| this is so creative! i like the crossing out thing. it shows a lot of emotion. good job! :D |
| 2005-11-11 17:59:36 | Sand Whisperer |
| Makes you wonder what the soul feels. |
| 2006-06-25 09:13:32 | User |
| We do know how insane this world is..but the way you express it is quite interesting..looking forward to more of your poems soon.. |
| 2007-06-03 09:50:58 | curly |
| wow I'll give you 7 |
| 2007-06-09 17:31:45 | Amy T. |
| I like the way you wrote it! ^_^ |
| 2008-01-23 03:44:36 | ~skater babe~ |
| i love it i can really relate to it |
| 2009-12-30 19:42:27 | Convalescence |
| How do u add color to your name like that? |