<cite><font color=blue>Cold hearted</font></cite>

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By <h><s><font color=Fuchsia>Heart-Less</font></s></h> •

<h3> horrible The world is a <s>beautiful</s> place. frown It makes me <s>smile</s> on a rainy day. NOT It makes my heart know exactly what ^ to say. </s> <s>Wonderful.</s> Scared. <s>Joyful.</s> Lonely. <s>Secure.</s> Hurt. <s>Happy.</s> Upset. These are feelings I feel in this cold-hearted world today. Scared because I'm lonely. Lonely because I'm hurt. Hurt because I'm upset. Upset because this world is so cold-hearted.</h3>

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August 12, 2005 03:46 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

love!

August 13, 2005 14:58faith. . .

effective with the layout type thing...the crossings out...good!

August 13, 2005 19:15abs

wow this poem is really made by the presentation- the contrast between what is actually said and what is crossed out makes it much more emotive. i ike it :)

August 15, 2005 20:49...

this is a really good poem and the presentation makes it even better!

August 16, 2005 18:50kelly

yeah i love it! it's really emotional and VERY true to most people i should imagine! how do you get the font and everything like that and the colour in your name?

August 16, 2005 20:07Sara

Wow thats amazing.
Sara
x

August 17, 2005 09:59Poet Gal

real gd. tht can be true to most ppl.

August 18, 2005 18:25wishing_on_stars

Wise words. I love the lay-out. This is truly excellent!

September 27, 2005 03:14ill haven

how on earth did you do this??

October 1, 2005 22:49Finding Myself♥♥

i'm with chuff, i'd totaly do this if i knew how. your poem is awsome. wow.

October 10, 2005 23:56Crimson.Wings

this is so creative! i like the crossing out thing. it shows a lot of emotion. good job! :D

November 11, 2005 17:59Sand Whisperer

Makes you wonder what the soul feels.

June 25, 2006 09:13User

We do know how insane this world is..but the way you express it is quite interesting..looking forward to more of your poems soon..

August 29, 2006 22:56Christina Lousie

I love this

March 21, 2007 19:20Angel of Music

This Poem is Amazing! I love it!

June 3, 2007 09:50curly

wow I'll give you 7

June 9, 2007 17:31Amy T.

I like the way you wrote it! ^_^

January 23, 2008 03:44~skater babe~

i love it i can really relate to it

September 29, 2009 23:18*Broken Wings*

wow i'm feeling this poem. good

December 30, 2009 19:42Convalescence

How do u add color to your name like that?

December 31, 2009 07:49Your Bitter Taste of Hell

I love this short sweet and i love your format