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By Too Blinded by the lips of L*O*V*E* to taste their sweet poison!

you wanna know a secret the one i always hide its a really good secret about you and the tears i've cried ok here it goes you know when i said u never made me cry heres the part you don't know that was the biggest lie i spent every nite in tears in pain over you and you wanna know the worst part i'll love you no matter what you do you wanna know another secret since i've decided to share its a pathetic part of me and its the part that wished you'd still care and u know whats worse than that are the scars that are un seen you kno the ones upon my heart from when u were being mean and while i'm still sharing i just thought i'd let you kno when u told me about those other girls i wanted to die so bad i planned how i'd go heres another secret i miss you all the time my heart bleeds for you so much i even start to rhyme i can't express my pain because its killing me inside to inally tell you about the millions of tears i cried every word you've ever said is etched into my brain every i love you ever told is causing me great pain you wanna know the worst secret of them all sometimes i wish we'd never met so i wouldn't have these memories to recall so know you know some of my secrets the ones i always hide they really are good secrets about you and the tears i cried

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August 18, 2005 07:14bedazzled

I love a poem that I can realate to, that just makes sense. WE have similar material you should check out mine

August 21, 2005 04:27XRebzX

I can completely relate to this poem too! Absolutely brilliant and my poems are very similar. I know how it feels to be treated like that. I really felt your pain in your words and your words were very good. Well done on an excellent poem!!

November 13, 2005 03:03love nothing >>--

I love this poem and I can relate to it good job