Walking forward., by Sara Subscribe to rss feed for Sara 

Looking back all I see is blackness,
Black meaning colourless, lifeless,
Meaning bleakness, mystery,
My life was a ruin,I bid to change,
So here I am walking forward,
Miles ahead, i see clearly,
Too far I fear, but i count,
1, 2, 3, 4, 5,
All fear gone, I bring up my head,
Smell the air, fresh, clean,
My head spins, im falling,
Down and down, deeper and deeper,
I lie, depressed and worthless,
I grab, reach for death, for the end,
The shadows take over i sleep forever.
Posted: 2005-08-14 13:56:38 UTC
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2005-08-14 17:40:27kelly
(sorry if it came up that i said 0, i pressed it by accident!!) anyway, i think this poem's brilliant, it relates to me in some ways, the words, like depressed and worthless!

2005-08-14 17:52:33Sara
Your not depressed and worthless, i wrote it when i was feeling really low so it kinda sums me up!