To see you smile

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By hidden •

I'm with friends, I'm telling a joke I didn't see you slip in. the punch line hits. we all laugh but it's your smile that shines through. it seams withering, tormenting, painfull to see you smile for whta I have done. but I feel happy and special inside. because your the one laughing it's times like these that I cherish what we had...what we still have. no one saw as your gaze met mine. theres still a spark there between us. I realise I still love you as you do I. But reality snaps back. everyone is stareing. It'll never work. "what do you want? I mutter "nothing," you whisper "nothing at all"

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August 16, 2005 15:27~*Angel*in*U*~

That was beautiful! I guess guys do have a soft spot. ;) It's Khadijah.
Tc

August 16, 2005 19:59Lora

you write more as though you are telling a story than depicting a piece of poetry but it is good xx

August 16, 2005 20:01hidden

that was more a story of my life. Cramped in a poem. I should write a story, but for that i'd need to creat an account on a site for storeys. I can't be botherd. So this is my life in poem

August 20, 2005 10:03Lillian

This is just like something that happens to me everyday with the person I love. That was so perfect. Awesome work.

August 22, 2005 19:34hidden

Thanks, I like to write...stuff?

October 5, 2005 01:00ill haven

painful*
what* I have done
cherish what*
there's*
realize*
staring*

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