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I'm with friends, I'm telling a joke

I didn't see you slip in. the punch line hits.

we all laugh but it's your smile that shines through.

it seams withering, tormenting, painfull to see you smile
for whta I have done. but I feel happy and special inside.
because your the one laughing

it's times like these that I cherish what we had...what we
still have. no one saw as your gaze met mine.

theres still a spark there between us. I realise I still
love you as you do I.

But reality snaps back. everyone is stareing. It'll never
work.
"what do you want? I mutter

"nothing," you whisper "nothing at all"
Posted: 2005-10-08 11:02:02 UTC

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2005-08-16 15:27:35~*Angel*in*U*~
That was beautiful! I guess guys do have a soft spot. ;) It's Khadijah. Tc

2005-08-16 19:59:20Lora
you write more as though you are telling a story than depicting a piece of poetry but it is good xx

2005-08-16 20:01:49hidden
that was more a story of my life. Cramped in a poem. I should write a story, but for that i'd need to creat an account on a site for storeys. I can't be botherd. So this is my life in poem

2005-08-20 10:03:40Lillian
This is just like something that happens to me everyday with the person I love. That was so perfect. Awesome work.

2005-08-22 19:34:13hidden
Thanks, I like to write...stuff?

2005-10-05 01:00:36ill haven
painful* what* I have done cherish what* there's* realize* staring* INTERESTING!