To see you smile, by hidden
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I'm with friends, I'm telling a joke
I didn't see you slip in. the punch line hits.
we all laugh but it's your smile that shines through.
it seams withering, tormenting, painfull to see you smile
for whta I have done. but I feel happy and special inside.
because your the one laughing
it's times like these that I cherish what we had...what we
still have. no one saw as your gaze met mine.
theres still a spark there between us. I realise I still
love you as you do I.
But reality snaps back. everyone is stareing. It'll never
work.
"what do you want? I mutter
"nothing," you whisper "nothing at all" |
Posted: 2005-10-08 11:02:02 UTC |
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2005-08-16 15:27:35 | ~*Angel*in*U*~ |
That was beautiful! I guess guys do have a soft spot. ;) It's Khadijah.
Tc |
2005-08-16 19:59:20 | Lora |
you write more as though you are telling a story than depicting a piece of poetry but it is good xx |
2005-08-16 20:01:49 | hidden |
that was more a story of my life. Cramped in a poem. I should write a story, but for that i'd need to creat an account on a site for storeys. I can't be botherd. So this is my life in poem |
2005-08-20 10:03:40 | Lillian |
This is just like something that happens to me everyday with the person I love. That was so perfect. Awesome work. |
2005-08-22 19:34:13 | hidden |
Thanks, I like to write...stuff? |
2005-10-05 01:00:36 | ill haven |
painful*
what* I have done
cherish what*
there's*
realize*
staring*
INTERESTING! |