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I'am the one the deals with the pain

the other boy, he's called Dane

He's the one everyone knows and loves

but to find me would be like a bullet through a flock of
doves.

he's the one that comes out at day

he's the one that likes to laugh and play.

but i

I am the one that emerges at night

i am the one that is filled with this spite

I'am the hourbor of the illwishings and torment

I'am the one that haunts his dreams, I shall be the
retribution

I have been waiting, lurking, growing, envelopeing myself in
the torture.

soon I shall have my revenge

the whole world shall feel this that I have for too long. 

your time is spent, we shall rise,we are strong
Posted: 2005-08-16 19:34:22 UTC
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2005-08-16 20:56:27~*Angel*in*U*~
I voted 7 so I don't know why it says 1.75...anyway that was good! Erm I'd look out if I were you. *laughs* Tc x

2005-10-02 00:23:18Finding Myself♥♥
L1-that*, what are you talking about. are you in a gang? hope not. good poem.

2005-10-05 01:04:37ill haven
I'm* or I am* the one that* deals I am* the harbor* or harbour* ill-wishings* and torment I am* or I'm* the one that haunts enveloping* hmm.. interesting

2005-10-07 20:53:48hidden
no gang, thats just me and an alter ego. he's just the one that gets all the anger.