cold and isolated

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By ~*Amo*~

The whole world is ganging up on me, my mates turned around so quikly, from mates to true enemies, my teachers try and comfort me, but i know there just the same and everything they say just means the opposite, i got dumped by what i thought was my love, at the first sighn of trouble, he ran a million miles away, the cops just spat at me, and told me how worthless i was, the prison warden didn't even look at me, grabbed me by my collor and laughed, my mum cries when she looks as me and i can heard her saying 'what went wrong?whatever did i do' my dad wants nothing to do with me he can't even bear to look at me now im sitting here all alone feeling isolated and cold just because off a little fun and messing about. only you are the one who stuck by me brother and that i won't forget our little fights as kids ment nothing its what happens in the long run thanks bro, that ill never forget

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August 21, 2005 16:19~*Amo*~

wot dya fink? tell me how 2 improve it plz
xXx Amo xXx

August 22, 2005 02:27just james

be more mature

August 22, 2005 13:15~*Amo*~

wtf how..im on bowt poem

August 22, 2005 22:14Steven Thurlow

lucky to have such a good relationship with your brohter!!i like this in the sense of it being from the heart almost a poetic diary! its gud!! chin up babe

August 25, 2005 15:37a rose by any otha name

in life all you may find is one true companion, keep writing

October 28, 2005 21:04love nothing >>--

If I wanted your advice Id ask Honey...

December 9, 2005 18:59Lillian

I love how you were able to make me feel just as low, but then the comforting feeling with the brother came into the work and that went away! Good poem.