Remnants of a Broken Picture

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By Cutie In A Death Cab

Our puzzle always had pieces missing Though somehow I just kept on wishing Hoping someday we'd be whole Time passed by and paid it's toll We're left with remnants of a broken picture Separate solids that were once a mixture Gaps and holes, now everywhere A sundered family, this isn't fair My absence leaves yet another rift It seems you're filling it rather quick Swiftly moving right along And now I feel that I don't belong My piece of the puzzle is lost somewhere And you don't seem to even care You've found another to take it's place Mine's become a form of waste Soon you'll have what i always wanted It will leave me forever taunted Enjoy your newfound happiness Enjoy this fresh eternal bliss

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January 25, 2006 03:10AndTheTreeWasHappy

I really like this one. You do such a great job with extended metaphors in your poetry!