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  Like a brick building on top of me. So many people
expecting so much from me,each person laying their brick one
by one they start to add up,I try to stop them, I try to
scream,I try to cry, but my voice is muffled under the
bricks. My screams and crys go unheard. I try to break free
but the bricks are too heavy I can't even shift under the
weight...
Posted: 2005-08-18 21:28:31 UTC

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2005-08-24 19:36:05~*blue-eyes*~
great poem it is so true love it

2005-09-02 19:25:09a rose by any otha name
pressure one of the great evils in life, well done

2006-06-11 01:39:13ImaginaryAngel
i can relate to this poem because i feel that way all the time too many people wanting to many things from me all the time like they think im supergirl or something! keep up the good work!

2006-12-22 19:16:48Just Eat My Heart Out
you really have something here... im impressed... very good job

2012-03-25 06:22:28stacy christiansen
been there. check out some of my poems and tell me what you think :)