pressure

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By tear~filled~eyes

Like a brick building on top of me. So many people expecting so much from me,each person laying their brick one by one they start to add up,I try to stop them, I try to scream,I try to cry, but my voice is muffled under the bricks. My screams and crys go unheard. I try to break free but the bricks are too heavy I can't even shift under the weight...

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August 24, 2005 19:36~*blue-eyes*~

great poem it is so true love it

September 2, 2005 19:25a rose by any otha name

pressure one of the great evils in life, well done

June 11, 2006 01:39ImaginaryAngel

i can relate to this poem because i feel that way all the time too many people wanting to many things from me all the time like they think im supergirl or something! keep up the good work!

December 22, 2006 19:16Just Eat My Heart Out

you really have something here... im impressed... very good job

March 25, 2012 06:22stacy christiansen

been there. check out some of my poems and tell me what you think :)