One Good Reason, by No Child Is Innocent Once Born
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Give me one good reason why I should stay.
Wait around and be ridiculed another day.
Give me one good reason why I should remain
When everyone else sees sunshine I see rain
Give me one good reason why I should stand tall
When all I want to do is curl up in a ball
Give me one good reason why I should fight
You aren’t the one who cries each night.
Give me one good reason why I should smile
When all I want to do is cry for a while
Give me one good reason why I should laugh
When everyone here knows my past. |
| Posted: 2005-08-18 16:52:48 UTC |
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| 2005-08-19 05:02:53 | just james |
| the only reason i like this poem is because you are being honest and honesty is rare in this world but you would have got a nine if you were honest about being happy because depression what ever the circumstances dose nothing good for anybody ?
yours faifully
just james....... |
| 2005-08-19 14:57:36 | TigerLily |
| tha was good... i agree with just james... honesty is good but why not write about happier things...
your loving weirdo- TigerLily
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| 2005-08-19 16:36:50 | Mai |
| I like it, a lot. The rhyming patter is simple, but it really works. I especially like the 'Give me one good reason why I should fight
You aren |
| 2005-08-23 07:38:57 | |
| that was good, it makes your feelings really easily seen, even a boy could understand them!! |
| 2005-08-25 14:40:04 | . QUEENIE . |
| i really like it. it's simple and yet.. touching, deeply touching. |
| 2005-11-24 16:52:01 | AUSTIN |
| well i like this one a lot and i disagree with just james... i think that writing about depression and getting everything out in the open helps a little. Writing about happiness when you're not happy seems a little unfaithful to your writing. --AUSTIN |
| 2005-11-30 16:31:59 | F@LLeN_@NgEL |
| I really like this poem hun, its simple but effective. well done! xXx
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