My First Love

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By Jesse

These thoughts These feelings I know I don't know what to think I don't know how to feel Everything's confused Everything's blank Do I smile? Do I cry? Do I scream? Do I yell? Do I give in?... Do I say no? All emotions in limbo All emotions hanging You're complex and you confuse me I've seen many sides Many sides of you How do you feel? I'll never know Lies, truth, deceit Love, confessions, illusions ....How am I supposed to feel? Do you care? How am I to know? Do you care?... If I care? I really don't know One second, all is right The next, all is wrong I've said "I love you" And you've said it back But is that how you really feel? Somehow, I'm not so sure Do I move on? Try finding "Mr. Right"? Or keep your thoughts near? Will you come back for me? I've tried everything I guess it hasn't been enough You're leaving me... Do I leave you first?.... I just don't know I'm leaving it at that I think I have to let go Of my very first love.....

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August 25, 2005 21:42Maren

Hey Jesse. Good poem. I wrote one about my first love, too... you might like to read it. ;) Don't give up! You're gonna be alright! Luv, Maren xxx

August 30, 2005 03:00Jesse

Thanks Maren. It takes time, but you're right. I'll be fine. Thanks again. :)

August 31, 2005 00:45Kar

I love the poem, so easy to relate to. Awesome! =)
Cheers! xOx - Kar

September 1, 2005 17:16a rose by any otha name

first love, is a pain in the ASS, I have a million poems about my first love, well done I enjoyed it