Questioning Myself

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By Lovesick and Sick of It •

Confusion Utter confusion How you’ve swept me off my feet Wisked me up into the air And dropped me And I fell Tumbling, story after story Until I found the ground Hit it with a THUD Picked up the pieces of my mind And started writing About Love And how it played with me And how I though I was absorbed in it But now I don’t believe myself when I say “I Love You” For there is another Who’s not funnier than you Who’s not cuter than you Who’s not better than you in any way But he’s there And I like him now This is not good bye, my love(?) It is merly me Sorting myself out Getting my head straight But I leave you with this: Maybe if you smiled with me Talked with me Spent time with me More I wouldn’t have written this poem

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August 18, 2006 19:15sharonrenee

Wow. I really like this one. Particularly that last part. "Maybe I wouldn't have writen this poem." Great Write.