SUPRISED

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By DONNA

Suprised is when i get kicked in the ankles at school Suprised is when my dad smashes in the window and comes to your room and he tells you hes going away for a while to a place were he can't cause harm. Suprised is when my dad ducks your mums head in the toilet locks me and my family in a room and takes away the phone. Relief is when the police finally come.

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September 12, 2005 12:53My_pain_your_thrill

I like this, it is touching.