Spider Web, by Steve Thompson
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There's a vision of me standing in the corner.
a reflection of who I want to be.
And as I stare my future right in the eye,
a sudden fear strikes my heart;
a fear like no other,
a fear from deep inside.
I've fallen victim of this spider web,
a twisted representation of life.
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Posted: 2005-01-24 14:43:09 UTC |
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2005-03-09 13:34:16 | queen of melodrama |
its wild how another person can express just how you feel...I loved it! |
2005-12-03 05:11:10 | Kauri |
superb... really... it sent a slight shiver through me to read my own thoughts.... i agree w/the queen |
2007-01-03 04:33:04 | Chalan |
i love the descriptiveness of it. |
2007-08-14 09:49:12 | xxSoulsxxLiexx |
this is absolutely stunning-its short but it sums up the feelings so well!!! |
2007-09-17 20:02:55 | Sarah |
This poem is verry good short but gets a good point across. I had a lot of feeling when reading. |
2009-12-31 07:25:29 | miss insashable |
wow i feel as though these are words that have gone through my head from time to time, amazing simple little poem! |