One Kiss, by Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~
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Your eyes burn of desire
Looking into my soul
Touching me
Bringing me to life
Opening up my heart
taking away the pain
passion, flaring
burning bright
Awakening from its slumber
hampering the boredom,
bringing me back
from being lost,
One touch, one kiss
lighting up my soul
and brightening up my desire. |
| Posted: 2006-03-15 16:47:40 UTC |
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| 2005-10-03 07:37:51 | jeanimoo |
| This is wonderful ~smile~
Heartfelt and full of emotion
Great write ~bigsmile~
Keep writing!!! |
| 2005-11-01 13:21:01 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
| wow, i really like that one. i can relate, as i read this all i could think of was the one that i love, it feels the same way. thank you for commenting. |
| 2006-01-07 02:05:25 | Faith |
| Kissing is so much fun! |
| 2006-05-07 06:03:26 | User |
| This is nice..full of romance... |
| 2006-06-28 01:14:24 | User |
| Kisses..?? I can only wonder how is it like...thanks for all your comments and about your question on whether have I really been through a relationship that I can write something like that..??? Actually,I have this very strong feeling for a girl until today..but then
I did not tell her that I love her when I had the chance a few years back..but as years go by I keep thinking of her and the absence of her makes this feeling more and more unbearable...now I
have lost contact with her and I keep on
thinking about her...and believe me..
those fantasies has inspired me to write
a few love poems like;Your Kiss,Eyes of
Love,Emergence of A Loving Spirit,A Beautiful Soul. Kind of dumb huh..?? I am trying to find ways of contacting her again but I guess all of my foolish notions will turn into despair if she's
no more single..but the very thought of
her innocence and just her makes me smile...but till today I still regret of
not telling her when we were working together few years back..well..I am in a
way living with this fantasy and till I see her again..I will have to go on living this way..I am a dreamer to tell you the truth..anyway sorry about going on and on about my fantasies.. |
| 2010-09-22 15:15:18 | Wingless |
| Ahh, to be in love and lust! I really like this, its colourful and deep. |