One Kiss

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By Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~

Your eyes burn of desire Looking into my soul Touching me Bringing me to life Opening up my heart taking away the pain passion, flaring burning bright Awakening from its slumber hampering the boredom, bringing me back from being lost, One touch, one kiss lighting up my soul and brightening up my desire.

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October 3, 2005 07:37jeanimoo

This is wonderful ~smile~
Heartfelt and full of emotion
Great write ~bigsmile~
Keep writing!!!

November 1, 2005 13:21Finding Myself♥♥

wow, i really like that one. i can relate, as i read this all i could think of was the one that i love, it feels the same way. thank you for commenting.

November 5, 2005 12:25so_close_but_yetso_far

I can totally relate. thnx 4 comenting! xxx

January 7, 2006 02:05Faith

Kissing is so much fun!

May 7, 2006 06:03User

This is nice..full of romance...

June 28, 2006 01:14User

Kisses..?? I can only wonder how is it like...thanks for all your comments and about your question on whether have I really been through a relationship that I can write something like that..??? Actually,I have this very strong feeling for a girl until today..but then
I did not tell her that I love her when I had the chance a few years back..but as years go by I keep thinking of her and the absence of her makes this feeling more and more unbearable...now I
have lost contact with her and I keep on
thinking about her...and believe me..
those fantasies has inspired me to write
a few love poems like;Your Kiss,Eyes of
Love,Emergence of A Loving Spirit,A Beautiful Soul. Kind of dumb huh..?? I am trying to find ways of contacting her again but I guess all of my foolish notions will turn into despair if she's
no more single..but the very thought of
her innocence and just her makes me smile...but till today I still regret of
not telling her when we were working together few years back..well..I am in a
way living with this fantasy and till I see her again..I will have to go on living this way..I am a dreamer to tell you the truth..anyway sorry about going on and on about my fantasies..

September 22, 2010 15:15Wingless

Ahh, to be in love and lust! I really like this, its colourful and deep.