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By No Child Is Innocent Once Born •

No one really wants to know, The real me inside People think I'm just a doll No one knows I cry. No one speaks to me like a normal person Just chat up lines of course, But no normal conversations With meaning or force. It makes me upset that no one listens All they do is stare Because I want somewhere to actually love I want someone to be there People take one look at me And assume I dont have feelings But they should all open their eyes To see my heart is healing Of course I like looking pretty, And attracting all the guys, But none want to know the girl I am They think I never cry So next time a guy stares, I'm gonna make him see I don't even want to talk to a guy Who doesn't want to know the real me. (Sorry for the shorthand but as you can now see, I have edited the poem so it is all typed correctly.)

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September 15, 2005 03:44thndrhwk

This is pretty good, but imo the bad grammar, spelling errors, and using numbers '2' shorten the words makes it flow oddly. Maybe it's just me, but I've found that chat-room-style writing makes poetry rather choppy. Of course, you might have done that on purpose; anyway, besides that it's good work.

September 23, 2005 03:56bedazzled

Yeah I agree I like the poem alot but the abbreviations are pretty confusing and a bit tacky, I really do like the poem though!

December 15, 2012 03:47George Chow

if our parents love was meant by God. Who would wait for that day without lust. Then the rest is waiting for God.