So Young

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By Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~ •

Why did you have to leave? to cause us all so much pain we died inside because of you! one pill one little thrill just for you to mess it all up. You took me with you down that path along that alley. Into the darkness that consumes me pressure rained supreme! you couldnt handle it, i know this now. You stole the soul of this family and broke it into tiny pieces Ive tried putting it back together to move on and grow out of it but it is to much pressure wieghing down on my heart. Im crumbling under the wieght help me, why did you have to leave? why did you have to take it that one little pill? I never knew you but what i do know is you took risks and took too many and ended up dead. Like i felt in my heart the day i was told Marc 1971-1996 So young taken away by one drug thats all it took. By Debbie D In memory of my brother

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September 15, 2005 10:43My_pain_your_thrill

I love this one, you can feel the emotion you felt while writing it, while reading it, it takes talent to be able to write like that. Well done xxx

November 8, 2005 18:12so_close_but_yetso_far

I agree with Thrill. Thanx 4 commenting, I really admire your work, It meant a lot for someone as good as you to comment.

July 31, 2006 06:12User

Ohhh..so filled with emotions..must be a
hard to get over experience...