So Young, by Debz ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~ Subscribe to rss feed for Debz  ~~ lost amoungst the pages of a story yet to be told ~~

Why did you have to leave?
to cause us all so much pain
we died inside because of you!

one pill one little thrill 
just for you to mess it all up.
You took me with you
down that path
along that alley.

Into the darkness that consumes me
pressure rained supreme!
you couldnt handle it, i know this now.
You stole the soul of this family
and broke it into tiny pieces

Ive tried putting it back together
to move on and grow out of it
but it is to much pressure
wieghing down on my heart.

Im crumbling under the wieght
help me, why did you have to leave?
why did you have to take it that one little pill?

I never knew you but what i do know is
you took risks and took too many
and ended up dead.  Like i felt in my heart 
the day i was told

Marc 1971-1996
So young
taken away by one drug
thats all it took.

By Debbie D
In memory of my brother




Posted: 2006-03-15 16:47:56 UTC

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2005-09-15 10:43:07My_pain_your_thrill
I love this one, you can feel the emotion you felt while writing it, while reading it, it takes talent to be able to write like that. Well done xxx

2005-11-08 18:12:41so_close_but_yetso_far
I agree with Thrill. Thanx 4 commenting, I really admire your work, It meant a lot for someone as good as you to comment.

2006-07-31 06:12:58User
Ohhh..so filled with emotions..must be a hard to get over experience...