I sit here, by Zanna
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I sit here and I think
I hope and I pray
What can I do better?
Is there really any way?
I sit here on my own
With this hole inside of me
I want to know, I need to know
How to make it be complete
I sit here all alone
I don’t even know why!
You obviously can’t tell me
But it hurts, it makes me cry
I wish I could do something
To make this go away
But I can’t, I know so I will just
Sit here another day
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| Posted: 2006-11-15 20:14:23 UTC |
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| 2005-09-14 20:49:53 | a rose by any otha name |
| i sense alot of inner conflict within your self as if you have lost your essence of existence and don't know how to get it back, good job though |
| 2005-09-15 19:25:55 | Zanna |
| Thank you, and you're completely right. I've lost myself. |
| 2005-09-21 23:33:43 | TearsOfJoy |
| i agree with you comment before mine. but i like this poem a lot. i also think it took a lot of heart to write it |
| 2006-01-06 17:09:04 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| "I sit here on my own
With this hole inside of me", many times a poem reflects how the writer is feeling, and you have admitted it to be so here. but I would like to add a bit of comfort if I may to an already admitted hole in your heart. People do sometimes feel this hole ,this emptiness that nobody or anything can fill up. I have had the same feeling. I know the sealant that filled the hole in my heart,for this God shaped hole in our hearts, it takes God to fill the gap!I hope you find the peace and love you desire.I loved your poem!blessings!
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