No one

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By XBeautiful_Strange_RoseX •

No one Cares, no one knows. about the pain I've been through. about how many scars I have. No one cares.. no one knows.. about all the heartache I've had. How many times my hearts been broke. No one sees the scars. No one sees the blades. No one cares about one lonely,goth girl. I cut too deep, but no one sees. I bleed too much, but no one knows. No one cares. No one would care and no one would know if I chose to die,today. So I think I might, or do I dare? Becasue I know if I do.. I know..that no one would care. No one knows, no one cares, about the pain I've been through. About how many scars I have

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September 16, 2005 16:22XRebzX

I really like this poem. It goes very deep and is full of emotion

September 21, 2005 22:13ill haven

Goths tend to be lonely... that's true.
I think you mean broken* in Stanza 2.

I just wrote a poem! haha.
I like this. I felt this way for 3 years. Good write. I love repetition.

September 22, 2005 20:18a rose by any otha name

the pain runs deep here, i hear it loud and clear, continue to express yourself

September 24, 2005 00:54Finding Myself♥♥

i like this poem it is very deep. and not to dissagree or be, i don't kno, to forward. in your real life i hope you do't always think like this. i know that if you read my poems they are a lot the same. i'm often very lonely. i just hate it when other people have to feel lonelyness. i really like your poems so far they are so deep and they show, progression, not only in your writting, but also your life.