a heart of white

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By Finding Myself♥♥

a heart of white, more precious than gold, so pure and sweet, so soft, not bold a heart of white, not black or gray, no scars or cuts, just pure, and clean it has no past, of threats or fears, it has no remembrance, of pain; no tears a heart of white, cannot be born, for all who are, must face a scorn and hearts of white, are whithout pain, without suffering, without shame a heart of white, most perfect

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September 19, 2005 01:51ill haven

L2: precious*
L5: or*
L10: remembrance*
L14: cannot*
L18: without

i like it. it hopes and holds to reverie. something i might have written had you not stolen it ^_^

September 24, 2005 20:51abs

this is a beautiful poem the end line is very thought provoking - it can be read in so many ways. nicely written :)

October 11, 2005 11:08Preston

I keep reading this poem. It doesn't move me deeply, but I enjoy it each time. Well done.