miss, by Finding Myself♥♥

m; for the misory
m; for the mourn
m; for wishing the memories gone

i; for the intense, excruciating pain
i; for wanting independence again
i; for the incredibly long period of time, thatgoes on
before you'er out of my mind

s; for the suffering
s; for the shame
s; for the sadness, the heartache and pain

s; for such, sufficient, success, you got for yourself, when
me, you left

miss; just a word, not worthy to explain, the feeling i got,
when you went away

but i guess it will do, for now it will have, till i find a
word, that will sum up the rest...

disappointment

Posted: 2007-05-13 20:33:57 UTC

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2005-09-20 11:43:17	Finding Myself♥♥
this wasn't written to a guy that left me if you're wondering. there was somthing that heppend to me when i was little. i haven't gotten over it yet. if you've ever lost someone you understand. thanks, please comment, bye

2005-09-22 02:17:43	ill haven
L1: misery* L4: intense, the word directly after intense is not a word. perhaps you meant "excruciating"? L5: independence L6: incredibly, space between that and goes L7: you're L10: heartache* STANZA 4: no real commas needed, i guess they're purposefully done. Last Line: disappointment*