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By Finding Myself♥♥ •

m; for the misory m; for the mourn m; for wishing the memories gone i; for the intense, excruciating pain i; for wanting independence again i; for the incredibly long period of time, thatgoes on before you'er out of my mind s; for the suffering s; for the shame s; for the sadness, the heartache and pain s; for such, sufficient, success, you got for yourself, when me, you left miss; just a word, not worthy to explain, the feeling i got, when you went away but i guess it will do, for now it will have, till i find a word, that will sum up the rest... disappointment

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September 20, 2005 11:43Finding Myself♥♥

this wasn't written to a guy that left me if you're wondering. there was somthing that heppend to me when i was little. i haven't gotten over it yet. if you've ever lost someone you understand. thanks, please comment, bye

September 22, 2005 02:17ill haven

L1: misery*
L4: intense*, the word directly after intense is not a word. perhaps you meant "excruciating"?
L5: independence*
L6: incredibly*, space between that and goes
L7: you're*
L10: heartache*
STANZA 4: no real commas needed, i guess they're purposefully done.
Last Line: disappointment*