dream, by ill haven
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The dream I create envision:
My heart, with delight
And joy in its happiness
Sinks into the night
The feeling of wonder
I imagine and make
Is broken asunder
The moment I wake |
| Posted: 2005-10-05 00:04:16 UTC |
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| 2005-09-20 22:11:04 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
| i love it. it, how you might say, peaceful. so many times i find myself living a dream, and i hate when i am disturbed from it. |
| 2005-09-20 23:49:38 | thndrhwk |
| The style in this is refreshingly different I think; most of the poetry here is dripping in agnst (and mine are no exception!) but this is poetry that can have depth without so much pain and pity as defines most modern poetry. |
| 2005-10-14 21:50:26 | waterlily |
| i like this poem.upbeat and hopefull.bright and cleaver.cute! |
| 2010-07-03 18:00:18 | baya |
| Ahh this was is so lovely and well written with the right kind of rhyme that most people miss but this is so amazing! |