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September 18, 2005 15:42No Child Is Innocent Once Born

That poem has a very definite rhythm and thyme to it which makes it all the better!

September 20, 2005 22:11Finding Myself♥♥

i love it. it, how you might say, peaceful. so many times i find myself living a dream, and i hate when i am disturbed from it.

September 20, 2005 23:49thndrhwk

The style in this is refreshingly different I think; most of the poetry here is dripping in agnst (and mine are no exception!) but this is poetry that can have depth without so much pain and pity as defines most modern poetry.

October 14, 2005 21:50waterlily

i like this poem.upbeat and hopefull.bright and cleaver.cute!

July 3, 2010 18:00baya

Ahh this was is so lovely and well written with the right kind of rhyme that most people miss but this is so amazing!