<font color=black>fountain</font>

By <b><h><font face=tahoma color=steelblue>ill haven</font></h></b> •
By <b><h><font face=tahoma color=steelblue>ill haven</font></h></b> •
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This poem is really good, I like the language you usse like (They make their way to the open field
To greet the flowers there.
They nestle on the stems and leaves,
Thus sweetening the air.) It makes the place sound really pretty!
I really like this one. Very nice picture it creates. The thought of a garden where life is planted and persona of water in a fountain waiting for someone is wonderful, pleasent thought. P.S Thanks for the comments on some of mine they are helpful. Smiling Always,
Jena
I love this poem.You are an artist in more ways than one!
This poem is so brillantly crafted. . . beautiful imagery I could see it all in my head the whole time.
A beautiful rhythm. Soothing sentiments. Quite different from mine. Lovely.