left in this place

By <h>ill haven</h> • October 5, 2005 00:05 UTC

I try and I try but I can never reach you, I struggle and I fight but all in vain You left on my shoulder a tearstain I miss you... oh if only you knew... You're flying away and never returning You won't ever look back There's only one setback In your absence I feel my heart burning I can't reach you. Why fly away? You left me in this place But I'll wait just in case You ever return someday...

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September 23, 2005 21:53Finding Myself♥♥

i really like this one. it sounds like a profecional poem. very, well i might as well just say it's wonderful.

September 24, 2005 01:00Finding Myself♥♥

i really love this on. i can't stop reading it.

September 24, 2005 21:10waterlily

old lovers have no reason to return...for there is all ways new lovers to spurn ...ignite and burn...

October 5, 2005 01:11ill haven

why thank you.

October 10, 2005 06:48Sumit Singh

intense and yet realistic