I live over your death, by hidden
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your gone
I'm alive
I dream of you
of your pain
the subtle crack
of your elbow breaking
the pleading scream
of my fist in your face
the muffled scream
of my crushing embrace
the slow drip
as my knife slits your wrists
the crunch
of my baseball bat and your chest
the scent of burning flesh
of the fire in your hair
a million and one tortures
I have envisaged for you
I can only relish the idea
of any of them coming true
all i wanted to say was that i miss you |
Posted: 2005-10-07 21:28:50 UTC |
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2005-09-25 21:38:30 | waterlily |
i wish i could kill my old siclian lover a thousand times in a row...even if it is in poetry you know... |
2005-10-05 01:10:39 | ill haven |
you're gone
fire in* your hair
nice word usage! |
2005-10-07 21:19:12 | hidden |
damnit! ok I need to look over my poems before i post them. thanks again |
2005-10-10 14:24:49 | Lora |
once again luv the last line
it totally alternates the rest of the message
xx |
2007-01-06 05:51:54 | sk8t3R gal 4 eva |
that was an awsome poem. i have commented on almost all of your poem and they rock!!! well i like the last line the best. |