Lost

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By Anthonysheets •

Thrashed about, Beaten and broken. Understood to be, Simply a token. Of insecurity, lies, and mistrust. Lost in this world of cardboard and plastic, Sin finds my soul decayed and placid. What truth can be found from an electron speckeled screen? Nothing, Forever, Never to be seen. Life is a fiction written by fools, from inside their safe walls built with misguided tools. Save me.

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September 19, 2005 20:44Finding Myself♥♥

i love it. so many people feel like that, but very few are willing to write about it. i like that you put words to reality.

September 21, 2005 02:20ill haven

hey, my friend. it's abelfrye. good to see you've come. i like this one as well.
this poem is still just as good.

September 21, 2005 06:43tangerine.kidd

...wow, it was such a nice poem. nicely written.

September 24, 2005 21:00abs

wow the last three lines are awesome. i really like it :)

November 10, 2005 21:06~JaLeEsA lOvEs PoLkA dOtS~

I love your words..."Life is a fiction written by fools"...that is so true! Well written. :)

February 8, 2006 00:29Innocent until proven Guilty

Your poem was tight. Its nice to hear a poem that si true.