sitting here, by Finding Myself♥♥
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sitting here worried
that all will go wrong
wishing to change
that which is going on
wanting you near me
is that such a crime?
i dream to change this
but vain are my tries |
Posted: 2007-05-13 20:34:00 UTC |
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2005-09-20 11:38:05 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
hi this is something that i did when i was in class. a lot of crap was going on and still is. i hope you like. please comment and if anything is wrong don't be afraid to tell me. thanks bye |
2005-09-22 03:36:34 | ill haven |
sure thing.
i like the on-purpose (is there a simpler adjective for this??) reverse speaking: "vain were my tries".
the only problem i can even fathom is a change of verb tense. but eh, it's poetry. it was probably (on-purpose word)
awesome
chuff |
2006-04-21 00:49:11 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
nothings wrong anymore, i fixed that situation, lol. again i love you baby |