sitting here
By Finding Myself♥♥ •
sitting here worried
that all will go wrong
wishing to change
that which is going on
wanting you near me
is that such a crime?
i dream to change this
but vain are my tries
This poem has no votes yet.
To vote, you must be logged in.
To leave comments, you must be logged in.
September 20, 2005 11:38Finding Myself♥♥
hi this is something that i did when i was in class. a lot of crap was going on and still is. i hope you like. please comment and if anything is wrong don't be afraid to tell me. thanks bye
September 22, 2005 03:36ill haven
sure thing.
i like the on-purpose (is there a simpler adjective for this??) reverse speaking: "vain were my tries".
the only problem i can even fathom is a change of verb tense. but eh, it's poetry. it was probably (on-purpose word)
awesome
chuff
April 21, 2006 00:49Finding Myself♥♥
nothings wrong anymore, i fixed that situation, lol. again i love you baby