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By Finding Myself♥♥

tired of the drama tired of the pain tired of the tear stained pillows that i've gained tired of the fantisies tired of the lies if i could just go back i'd change my whole life time i miss you and i'm sorry for messing up our lives i love you so much babie but i have to say good-bye

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September 20, 2005 01:22ill haven

are your misspellings on purpose? thanks for commenting. i appreciate it.
no problem at all.

i'll tell you them just in case they aren't on purpose.

title, L1, L2, L3, L5, L6: tired*
L3: stained (unless you were going for a British I don't know deal)*
L4: gained (again maybe the foreign thing)*
L5: fantasies*
L8: lifetime*
L11: baby*

i like it. i don't like drama either :)

September 21, 2005 02:13ill haven

i like it i like it.
i never really experience feelings like these. i guess the girl i love never gives me chance.
karma?
police?
good write. thanks for commenting (t4c) Abel Frye (-af-)

April 21, 2006 00:50Finding Myself♥♥

i was tierd, and i did something about it, are ya'll proud of me?! i love you baby, andrew (ofcourse)